lelegai和dofast

lelegai和dofast 真的好用嗎，有沒有用過的人跟帖說一下啊，還有，我加樂樂的QQ 怎麼有被刪了，我都還怎麼問啊
& |# c' Y8 @" E! b( ~$ l- j
5 ?3 P* }# ~  d; ]

沒有吧，我加樂樂老師也有一段時間了，沒被刪呢，你幹什麼壞事了 - -

QQ滿了 給你留言你沒有回話 就刪了。。。
4 d5 T$ z3 S# W: y9 _# z

樂樂 發表於 2013-10-29 15:51
QQ滿了 給你留言你沒有回話 就刪了。。。

4 N+ H" q; R/ w7 I4 ]/ Y) v暈 我當時沒看到留言。
! y# a" |! B. E那我在這裡問你一下吧，lelegai需要花多少時間學習才能做出比較好的改寫效果，還有 我能單獨買lelegai嗎，多少錢
3 W& R& k9 ]/ x, q1 G
  ^- Y& I% X% {4 o1 Y0 U3 U! R% y2 O! X

樂樂不會這麼拒絕新客戶的。
9 l" a* W5 ]) M* z% ?5 d0 U$ T

bin 發表於 2013-10-29 15:53
暈 我當時沒看到留言。
, A2 B4 w+ _4 e  m8 s, u4 y那我在這裡問你一下吧，lelegai需要花多少時間學習才能做出比較好的改寫效果，還 ...

核心教程有 接近15個小時，還差兩集實戰copyscape和實戰高級改寫教程在製作中
所以這裡顯示只有12個半小時
- }6 t) b3 @. E6 {5 J) c
吸收這12個半小時教程至少需要2-3倍時間
就算3倍 36小時

  z; t) Q( p$ v# i改寫效果，這裡有一份一位兄弟學習了教程之後改寫的一篇文章
. u- {* z+ Z8 n  T0 D/ M$ C" T; Q426字，通過copyscape.
他花了一個多小時改寫，因為是第一次改，不熟悉。（我用16刀買下了他這篇文章，所以才敢公佈）
. e! V0 r) O" ~+ x* z7 r) i熟悉之後，特別是用高級改寫方式，速度會快很多。。。
1 x9 s1 v' v+ V  Z. M2 T9 w1 F( z. r
用樂樂改寫方法改寫質量，可以自己讀讀試一試。

1. When Premature babies are being transported ,they require urgently care and special attention.There are several health conditions in preemies, such as low muscle tone, breathing problems and slow heart rates and so on. Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs. Consult earnestly for your doctor first and take any workable advice that he recommends strongly so that the best method of transporting premature baby should be selected.
   ! T+ O) d5 e! j& Q2 H) G+ a- @
2. 
   
3. Harness Height
   
4. The harness height need to be inspected When you choosing scrupulously for a premature baby's car seat,
   " d' [$ d1 {: X8 J2 y( T
5. The placement which is the safest of the shoulder straps is below or at the shoulders. The harness height should never be above shoulder level for your baby. A shoulder height below 8 inches in the car seats should be selected for preemies's Parents . This will ensure a conventionally proper fit for your small babies.
   
6. 
   
7. It's the crotch strap which is on the baby car seat that should be no further than five inches from the back of the baby car seat for premature babies. it could allow room for the small baby to slump down badly which could cause unavoidably improper breathing when the crotch strap is longer. You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
   . m* S1 ^) B. U5 }0 w- h
8. 
   6 b. L( }2 f# a6 K/ `" l
9. your preemie will feel secure and safe when a car seat that offers genuinely body support . Stick fast to the car seats that have built-in support as opposed firmly to buying the support cushions for baby separately. The support cushions must have passed safety regulations and are thoroughly tested with the car seat. what baby support cushions have is cradle the body while supporting effectively for the baby head can keep your baby's head safe from rolling around during transport in your car. what the rear-facing car seat recline to a 45-degree angle will keep your baby's head safe from falling forward.
   5 A, G5 {& W" z0 O1 R( {9 |
10. 
    " M7 Q  x! N2 z3 \* f- X2 x
11. Weight Guidelines
    # w( \8 C) q( v/ j3 f3 m* s8 G$ j
12. the car seat has the suitablenbspp;weight allowance is very important when  a car seat for a preemie was selectednbspp; As usually , when the newborns weighing more than 5 pounds ,The average car seat is suitable for your baby . A car seat should be selected that will accommodate easily for your babies that are four pounds or less by premature babies's Parents. You must Make sure that baby fits within those guidelines and the car seat states the weight requirements.
    

複製代碼

樂樂 發表於 2013-10-29 16:49
核心教程有 接近15個小時，還差兩集實戰copyscape和實戰高級改寫教程在製作中
- D2 S: ?$ ?/ }所以這裡顯示只有12個半 ...

當時說買我的才5刀 辛虧沒賣 不然我就虧大了

樂樂 發表於 2013-10-29 16:49
核心教程有 接近15個小時，還差兩集實戰copyscape和實戰高級改寫教程在製作中
所以這裡顯示只有12個半 ...

% i; I" U6 {3 d' f" ]哎，這語法怎麼感覺這麼亂啊

自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 19:09
9 `+ ]/ }, V3 J哎，這語法怎麼感覺這麼亂啊

& I+ a" W8 U9 \2 u. e有些小語法錯誤 比如 when you choosing 這種，能否把覺得亂的地方指出來一兩句？
4 [- K9 a% n4 V) D- x" L4 m
& a& T9 K, e, [: o

Because of their size which are tiny,  in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have is cradle the body,  反正讀起來不是那麼舒服，可能改寫的時候太生硬了，適合外鏈文章。個人意見別見怪。