本帖最後由 樂樂 於 2013-12-13 16:16 編輯
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Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type. 1 c4 }& E @ S% T
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1. 簡易改寫版（幾乎不需要英語基礎。。。）- Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.
0 m; i/ G5 M1 {這個例子，包括以後的例子裡，大家一定要記住：
/ l( [( p. ]% R. E4 r' q; o1 e" D7 k定語從句一定要掌握好，改寫裡很重要，不管是否有樂樂改教程或者dofast教程，改寫者一定要掌握。- A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there』s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.
- Do you have a case for your camera? It』s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an 「ugly」 camera but I like it so much that I won』t exchange it for any other cameras.
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