請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！
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I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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1 i/ X; p/ B- U) B$ N4 A: h& ICan you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,
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I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:

- ]- }8 W9 v. ~- a! i8 S[Correct Address]
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9 }3 W: k4 X- t$ @: s6 TRegards,
[YourName]

謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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2 f2 M7 M2 }) w5 q" G2 g試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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來個更地道一點的：
! W  P) [/ K: M" s3 jRecent payment was received with many thanks.
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* H. X( y( d# I, U' y: PBut it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

6 e2 k! y3 K; @7 [3 r+ W" C! j  {! [Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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I look forward to hearing from you.