請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


1 k0 m% n" d4 B- @& T+ C試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！

, k: s( ^4 r2 H/ V) c$ LI`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,
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I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:

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Regards,
0 _3 h% }, [2 ^# L. H- m[YourName]

謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
% t" H1 `8 A/ D# G" s3 s% d謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


: S- R. E( j! X, ?試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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來個更地道一點的：
1 G5 n1 w  o! {' \' cRecent payment was received with many thanks.
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' a. S: I/ z# x. b/ {: YBut it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.
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Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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& x; u- q0 w8 s6 Q* h1 ^; U5 hI look forward to hearing from you.