原創5篇amazon產品review作為練手，請各位大俠

jayhkun 發表於 2013-12-21 11:56
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謝謝啦:):):):):)
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利害哦，能寫出不錯的文章
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更新第二篇，運動監視器，這篇還是花了三個小時，有點不爽，在寫review的時候，在細節上還有點把握不住重點。以後再寫之前要列個list。

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I』ve been a big fan of activity trackers for years. I know how important a good activity tracker is to achieve healthy and fitness goals, as you can put in perspective your body status more effectively in the form of data than what you feel about yourself. Recently, a tracker named Withings Pulse caught my eyeball when I was surfing the Amazon. It』s kind of a cool looking tracker with high-tech feeling and more importantly it owns nearly all the features a ideal tracker should have. So I decide to give it a review so I can share it with you guys here.

Portable size & high-tech feeling

When choosing a activity tracker, the size always matters a lot as we need to run with it. I want it to be a cool, tiny gadget that I enjoy taking it along with me when I choose a tracker. The Withings Pulse is design to be pocket-sized. It』s as tiny as matchbox with smooth edge. Besides, it』s super lightweight-only 8 g.I bet you can』t feel it at all when running. The shell is made of black firm plastic. Together with a blue LED content display in 128 pixels x 32 pixels resolution, the Withings Pluse tracker does offer a high-tech feeling which is really cool. If you』re anything like me, it would definitely suit your case.

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The brand calms that the Withings Pulse is the first activity tracker with heart rate monitor function. Though I did never see that function on other tracker before,but who knows. Anyway, it can monitor your heart rate while you are asleep to give you an overview of your sleep quality by uploading the date from the tracker to your smartphone through a Bluetooth connection. There is a free supporting app available to analyst the data. As you know, a steady and smoothheart beat throughout the night is a sign of good sleep. Moreover, you can measure your heartbeat after running by simply lay one of your fingers on the measurement point where there will be an indicator LED blink. As the resting heartrate decrease, your overall health is being better.

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The hours of battery life on a charge is up to 2 weeks., according to the official illustrationand some customers』 reviews. I used to own a tracker named Fitbit. It』d never been more than 7 days between 2 charges. It』d be great if you want taking it along on the hike for several days. There is nothing to worry about as long as you charge it before you set off. You can still get an extra 24 hours of it tracking even it runs out of power. It seems that it has some kind of backup power. It』s charged through a stand Micro-USB to USB wire, which makes itreally convenient.

Other features& specs
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l  Portable

With a original silicone or metal clip, you can easily mount it on your clothes or in yourpocket.

l Track your running

No need to set upanything before you start running. A built-in High precisionMEMS 3-axis accelerometer will automatically sense you move and start tracking. Your running data will display on the OLED screen.

l  Easy to use with touch screen

You can get all of your data history by touching the screen without a smartphone.

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l  Powerful app to analyst all the data andimprove yourself

All of your data: steps run, burnedcalories, stairs climbed and distance travelled could be synced to your smartphone, on which the Withings Health Mate app will translate them into graphics. You can also read your fitness and health trends on it.

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l  Master your body's weight

The Health Mate app can measure the calorice quivalents of your meal that』s logged in the MyFitnessPal app - the world's largest food, nutrition and calorie database by yourself against the calories you burned to give you visualable idea to support your weight control plan.

Customers』review & Any complains?

It gets 3.6 stars out of 5 in more than 200 customers. Most customers appreciate its pocket-sized design and useful multifunction, especially the sleep monitor.Some people complain that it』s no way to read the data on OLED screen under sunlight and they are a little unhappy that it can』t be synced to a PC or MAC. Clickhere to learn more customer reviews.

Conclusion

It has done a pretty good job at this price. If you are seeking a cost-effective tracker, you might be interested taking a look at it. It』s available on Amazon with free shipping now, and you should not pay more than $100 on it.

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9 G9 O9 _1 n5 l- U- d第三篇出爐。慢慢有感覺了，大概用了2個半小時，同時要注意控制字數，第一段的廢話要少說。發現事先把每一段的主題列好，再進行內容填充，會高效很多。在這個過程中也是對各種詞彙用法的一次複習，有些不會的表達先查百度翻譯，盡量做到地道一些。最後兩篇，單篇爭取在2個小時內完成。模塊化.
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與大家共勉。

紅外線測溫計

Braun Braun Thermoscan 4520 Ear Thermometer With Exactemp Technology Review – Is it wellworth the money?

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Parents always feel like ants in their pants once their sweetie baby gets a fever.Well, they have some reason for that, because fever might lead tosome unpredictable situation in babies' brain development if not treatedcorrectly in time. Unfortunately, one of my cousins who is short and gets some language problem is one  of these typical miserable instances. And he lives a hard time at his20+ now. He could be 100+ times better if his parents notice his fever in timeand took him to the hospital before it was too late.   

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So it's important to know the real thermometer of your baby once the baby is sickor uncomfortable. To some parents, body temperature monitor is aeveryday schedule. The traditional way is to get oral or rectaltemperature which is disgusting. But you know what? They both are not thataccurate as you think.  Clinical study has uncovered that they both arenot the core temperature of the body and could be influenced by the factorsfrom outside easily.

The eardrum temperature, however, is an accurate andquick reflection of the core temperature as it has the direction connectionwith the temperature control center of the brain through blood supply. So thisis where the Braun Thermoscan Ear Thermometer comes in, a medicalinstrument that could tell an accurate core temperature of the body by using infraredtechnology. My doctor has used it on my little son once when he got a seriousfever and headache not long ago. I thought I might have one in my housesince it's so cheap. So I've done some research that I can share here with you.

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Pre-warmed function toensure accuracy and…

The BraunThermoScan warms up first when using. In this way, it cuts the cooling effectof your ear canal to and makes the heat distribute more evenly in your earcanal to give a highly accurate result. And the probe doesn't feel cold at allaccording to a customer review. Besides, it』s really helpful if you want tomonitor your baby』s temperature while he is asleep without frightening him by insertingan ice-cold probe tip into his ear. In fact, he might totally not feel it atall.

Infra-Red Technology to Make Measurement Fast

The basicprinciple of the Braun Thermoscan Ear Thermometer is to accurately sense theinfra-red heat radiation of the eardrum and tissuearound through a kind of sensitive infra-red sensor. So it can give a fastresult.

LensFilters to ensure Accuracy & Prevent Germs spreading

There are 21lens filters and cap in original package. Users must put a lens filter on the probe before use. A lens filterdetector will be checking if the lens filter is in its place. It』simportant because the probe might be polluted by the impurities in the ear,which leads to unnecessary accuracy error. Besides, the tip of the probe might easilycause scratches by direct inserting the ear canal. A lensfilter does help a lot. Those little stuff can be cleaned and reused for manytimes.

Other features

l  Fast measurement. Unlike some kinds of thermometers,you can get result in just 3 seconds with it.

l  On-Off button for easy control. With adetailed manualinstructions, anyone can operate it like the back of his hand.

l  Memory function stores last 8 readings to letyou exclude the data from significant interference that might happen sometimes.

l  Soft, flexible tipOral, rectal or underarmuse. I bet you don』t wanna use it on recta, though.

l  Portabledesign. Just 2 AA batteries can drive it to work. No need to find a socket.

l  Displayresult in 2 different units. Attached quick manual instructions for changingthe temperature scale between Celsius and Fahrenheit.

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Customer review & Any complains?

No productreviews would be perfect without reviews from the real customers. While surfingon Amazon for customer reviews, I found more than 700 helpful reviews whichmade it gain an amazing 4.4 out of 5 stars rating. Most people appreciated itsfast, accurate professional result and easy usage. Some told that it stillworks great after 3 years. 『Made in German』 is always the representation ofhigh quality. While there is still some complains saying that the LCD doesn』t have a back-lit. They can only read the measure result under light source. And some housewife complained that the probe is too big for her baby』s ear. Though I』venot read any other complain about the size of the probe, but in case your baby』sear is accidently much smaller than others, you should not buy it.

Click here to learn more customer reviews.

Anyway, it has some reason to be the bestseller on Amazon. At this time, they have 32% discount, which is about $40, including free shipping. There might be price fluctuation, but you shouldn』t pay more than $50 than it.

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     樓主英文水平不錯啊！
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為何LZ的標題都是一個模式呀？ ———— XXX產品，值得購買嗎？
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