請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！
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9 e( b$ l9 b. K7 D  f7 pI`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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# d4 q6 Z) B0 o/ z1 t* B9 [Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,

4 b4 f: m' [' I$ k$ NI have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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0 t8 b* Y/ L6 ^5 i# `7 P) d: C[Correct Address]

9 T# w# p! T" b* t& [6 WRegards,
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原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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! f, X9 }& _) i4 _試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

/ ~( }& `  J0 j) L( \" r樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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來個更地道一點的：
# |$ A' G/ K; a, J7 F9 kRecent payment was received with many thanks.

- F( u, ?: y2 [( D2 ^1 G0 aBut it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

9 a" X7 u  r+ x! ]: {/ f, TWould you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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I look forward to hearing from you.