請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


' ~& y* X' i" @7 M- I1 M8 ?試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！
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I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.

Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,

I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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[Correct Address]

Regards,
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謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


  @$ e; Q, g6 V# L試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

' d; D, T9 k. x樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。

來個更地道一點的：
Recent payment was received with many thanks.
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: S  ~4 O: s- V- S/ H& b: NBut it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

* W% B7 Q9 P- n% kWould you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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I look forward to hearing from you.