麻煩哪位英語高手幫忙翻譯一句純正點的謝謝

你好
- a  ?/ Q2 ~1 E" [; Z1 T' A  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

原帖由 rr2005 於 2006-8-19 01:15 發表
3 M6 \( }! T) ?- r你好
7 u) a  e% P+ K( t: I$ f: U+ k& h  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.
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as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?
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翻的不錯~~~

熱心助人＋

原帖由 中國VIP俱樂部 於 2006-9-14 17:51 發表
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the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.
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/ c) K- ]- D+ h2 |- n9 {as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?

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% u, U2 n" L. p+ _Dear Sir/Madam:
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We haven't received your last payment.
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8 `- E/ d0 X" [9 rWe will move to a new premises therefore please re-send the last and future payment to the following address.

+ E5 F- G- h& t& I0 `We are looking forward to hearing from you.

# ^2 i. }' m/ x! u1 \# ]Regards

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好心助人並無心冒犯

supercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。

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原帖由 段續風 於 2006-10-8 17:11 發表
2 r2 r/ o4 Y( v7 xsupercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。
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Dear Sir/lady
( N" ?1 Y$ p. Z) Vi have not recived the check that it's send by your company last month,because i'll remove my house,so kindly pls re-send the check to my new address,the new address detail as below:
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looking forward you kindly reply.
thanks&Best Regards

that it's send  改成 that was sent

Dear Sir/Madam
I have not yet received the check issued last month from your company .As I will  move into a new house, sorry to trouble you to send the check to the following  address:

Best Regards!
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