請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


3 U/ r+ ?/ f2 d2 W! _試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！
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I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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8 S8 F: @3 k0 V7 w4 W9 @6 aCan you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,
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I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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3 s3 V1 O4 v. y' ][Correct Address]
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0 X8 b, m0 w* c2 rRegards,
[YourName]

謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
( [9 i4 N' I6 f  F" n' d/ d謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

, J* ]5 F/ I* r0 F樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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來個更地道一點的：
Recent payment was received with many thanks.
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5 m2 x) N( E; q; gBut it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.
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/ g, V) B7 m5 ~/ i7 S: uWould you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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' |2 v1 m9 _% E, _) J3 J" Y' BI look forward to hearing from you.