aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 ( B: N0 P2 ~, x l+ } j2 [" I
我來給你說說吧!
8 p) g. @' F3 {! c2 m首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。9 p6 W& w$ l+ l6 v: \
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... : A4 j+ F: ^, f Q; r2 k
原文:
8 G% k% h3 b S& OIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit., N8 G- @( Z2 [. ~9 @3 O
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
4 p' x# ~" W- ^4 f4 ]! Y他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好4 Y$ K& {( \- f1 L& I, }
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的2 c8 ~. n) R4 o1 N! d6 X
稍微加一點料- E8 S: {! p2 T% Q, t) p- V" Z
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.: g; a0 x2 @9 r9 X
就再次變得自然了
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