aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
* ^% o( Y! M# k我來給你說說吧!
5 q) s* e' f! z' }( A& {! a' j首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。+ F, M9 Q; x. g$ E7 a% L
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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& J1 N v( L% x4 p0 H8 jIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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# z4 |' J3 C9 a* [( K) ?: MYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句6 G# m+ Z3 J" {' c3 y1 ]: |
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好& U# n8 A. ?, s1 L. {# C, C5 p
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
4 z' p0 @: e+ Q" R* g8 p. o就再次變得自然了
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