自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
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Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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