aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 ; _5 K2 `0 n: x+ ?& w2 r, |% N
我來給你說說吧!
1 z6 ~0 p) a, |5 k Z首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
$ }$ K* v9 r/ a' X1 i, NDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.# `4 f) q6 ?( F
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學員改寫:
6 r% E; d5 f' a) mYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句- L/ A/ V* l. w) [/ z( \& v
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好6 r+ I w; ~' m$ O8 F5 S/ n
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的: b0 Y9 \ q8 a7 u' W& r
稍微加一點料
: j& x4 g& z) u \$ X( i% s2 g; YYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
# U, _8 w$ r" z0 U" p就再次變得自然了* I/ h- x$ h. i
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