自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 % C1 P; i3 {' F7 h5 E
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... - _" U2 D2 U4 O+ O! P1 @8 Z
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2 u6 ~/ _" s7 s' K1 m# C6 e* b5 cBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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$ [. ?. j+ @( u r" ?+ G) ?這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,( {1 ~" [3 y3 D1 b) {9 B2 s/ J
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
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Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.5 y" H5 L( s P7 b: c. S# v( |
就自然了。
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