aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 / M9 _" d, r0 ]* s) K* Y) ^3 d
我來給你說說吧!! J# |2 d4 s7 @ i4 o
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。. a: e0 H; S* q
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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' U$ e6 y: U. DIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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% m! D$ M& n6 y% u( Q- i( [You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句 \4 H6 i# b9 G
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
3 o/ f0 A8 N L! U4 L) K% A樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的6 N/ u4 ~9 R8 d+ _
稍微加一點料" _% V8 N$ s2 u: y5 f
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.' L- Q" P, ~0 i' @, V
就再次變得自然了! b, u! U! R3 J$ F) u
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