自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 & d! I7 x4 r* y w3 X' r& Q
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... " y; X2 `0 Y8 ]# x* ?# f8 O+ W
原文:
% @( i: S, A6 oBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
" i1 N4 Y. t: d( e( y/ {: H/ e: J因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,7 z# {- I# a! Q& Y
你看,我稍微加一個單詞% q2 h, M1 H, R5 i7 g" e
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.: @( t2 `/ J' ^, t. f4 k5 L
就自然了。& D$ e4 k# K& R& j6 G9 X' X' ]4 c
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