aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
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) W8 E, R7 v3 X J首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。) Z2 w2 }7 t- U9 u# `! w* }. T
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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2 X7 J z. J' M* M8 @2 K* iIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.6 Y- o# ]& g8 x* i0 A
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學員改寫:
1 N2 K! @8 ^, z% Y7 BYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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! Q' h L; Y* w# F4 w- R9 \2 g1 M同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
. M; [% a- b8 w; P他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
5 e5 o) ?7 a( K. S' d- N+ v樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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7 ^8 F9 n! h( {/ g: K0 g9 N7 lYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.6 y. U2 c M, J' `7 _3 G
就再次變得自然了
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