aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 * o5 Z% Y& q) }9 I9 x
我來給你說說吧!+ w; c4 W; K* Q$ Y( W: G, z
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
' F! S( Y% d ^3 d0 sDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
1 l$ w [$ L; b5 G原文:
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學員改寫:
" `7 u' _) D* `# `, q% FYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句, \8 b4 z$ ]! w
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
. |$ k/ G% U9 j9 l: I3 E樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
8 [6 c! S& U5 k) G3 L& ]稍微加一點料- F* {% u" V0 o. |3 K( B, P+ Q9 _
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.- x( e, ^& p: D) O! c/ u |$ r3 f5 f- f
就再次變得自然了6 K) r+ j) |% d' ]5 P; G* U( a: y
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