自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 B, C4 a7 j0 x
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.5 k% E* p, b( _( J5 @) N& i
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,, d9 A4 |) W8 o( q/ P" G
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
! J4 j8 f: P7 d; U. y你看,我稍微加一個單詞/ S7 o1 _, Z, O: E" t
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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