自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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原文:
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學員改寫:
9 H8 U9 ?3 Q2 xBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs. B/ M! _9 _! I3 s0 H1 |
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,/ g+ E/ Y( D0 u5 j; D. Q C
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
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Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.: X4 c6 M5 o* I. g( x! D# b1 ?
就自然了。# m, v# k' P3 S& ^
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