自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 " \# [: t' n m- r3 J4 X2 H
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... ( A; ~7 J4 l4 o, H. g1 L
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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學員改寫:, a$ [7 r. T5 u' J, R. {" D
Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.- Y6 @7 |. c/ N. m6 `8 D
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,7 d9 Z2 \6 R, T: N' P4 X8 y9 ]% s/ B
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,1 v8 h1 a1 f" t/ N8 m4 a" ~
你看,我稍微加一個單詞" B7 R# H' M+ t+ O2 _# m& M
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.. D3 U' x" `6 Y+ y
就自然了。
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