自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 * N# @0 J2 h; j
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... 3 _6 Q! z# X' I
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.# \; }' d; \4 l) v
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
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你看,我稍微加一個單詞& B# S1 Q! m5 A1 A3 g* g: o7 V
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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