aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
# q: l) c3 c6 o3 @/ Q我來給你說說吧!# b/ K9 L; m7 J6 M+ J5 \
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
' {4 p9 a. Q+ c$ @ lDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... 9 L# @: J. Y; d* o9 q5 i
原文:
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學員改寫:, Z, O! n- U/ r& n* m, Q1 G* ]
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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: g, W8 B, k1 X+ g. G3 q4 N7 C同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句8 N8 E' m* \+ P
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
6 o" J9 A6 r @# `, X8 t; H* d樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit./ O$ i) g$ Q7 ]& L. j- F4 f
就再次變得自然了/ h$ L6 a' S4 |: D( f1 Z
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