aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 & @4 d6 r# Z' c
我來給你說說吧!
* S: c% V+ d7 D+ x) O首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
( C% A/ E: |% \- j) @7 JDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... - g( [+ x" F: t/ }# v K
原文:
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學員改寫:" ?5 @2 U) |! F6 F' R% [: @. \
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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" @: l, n5 q6 h, O! o* O4 _同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句( ]" s5 W, y; g3 u2 ]
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好5 c) t2 @ G" \- \0 }' w- d% D/ X
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.# o7 d7 o3 Y! _( S
就再次變得自然了; l8 Z% F7 ?$ \$ O6 s% v$ s B
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