aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
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首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。7 m3 X: j& N# J4 v* ^
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... ) B+ s1 K8 C4 L
原文:
# f6 X1 I' |. s& qIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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學員改寫:
& S$ W5 }) E% F6 y+ ~0 F) LYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.7 b0 u7 v1 n" D# w' `1 f! h) t
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
d& n, R! V4 R0 W他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
: G5 s5 Z. I2 a- n9 F; y. u |! v- G樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的/ f5 Z4 H# p: Y5 L
稍微加一點料
+ N0 |6 d# }7 bYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
: V( j8 _5 A2 F v, Y7 B( B就再次變得自然了8 c" L# H0 K- N' U6 i
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