自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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學員改寫:
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因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,( d. v0 I5 r+ C9 m
你看,我稍微加一個單詞- I, E9 Q: ?: z
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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