aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
9 i3 }2 r7 x, }# h, A5 F) n5 _$ Z我來給你說說吧!
. F7 T5 f/ q9 [; ]* [首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。$ W6 Y7 `5 ~7 o) r( Y; v F8 q @
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... / }& p; p& a& U7 i) a- Z6 a
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit. o( N- E8 f! i( c' |
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4 G. p v) m2 K2 M. Y1 w9 [You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.6 J4 e" _# V: X3 Q! O
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句, Z& `1 h, l, d) L$ @4 V
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
, c/ I3 t+ V+ K* z( a9 j3 f0 B0 E" y樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的6 j, K" R! z, H8 c$ d# m. k& n
稍微加一點料
# S) ?* a9 |! K% iYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
# T2 v1 d! k/ d7 ~; _, P1 [% N就再次變得自然了( O1 {$ [/ ^( U: Z5 J
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