自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 , C. B$ f D# ?3 S- y+ f( f
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... % {* L9 S6 y# }
原文:
2 l" ^) N2 @# C, q# J" E" kBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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7 J; @7 Z7 a9 R: p0 \Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.- j* F- C; ?' Z; b" v6 M/ m+ H
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,0 ^+ Z& u( [7 r
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,* J3 ?/ B' p( T
你看,我稍微加一個單詞
0 t: q! R' Q. y4 P& dBecause of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
; O) M' |; ]. R% @* O- D就自然了。
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