自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 ; Q0 D' [' z2 J' C+ v9 L$ k
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ...
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' j6 E9 @% ~/ v" M! IBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie. m- Q% c4 o+ s3 I& \% I
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. P8 p9 ?' g. U* XBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
& _* r0 Z- Q, E+ A" v, u o; d因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,) @( ^8 d9 J) u/ i8 z$ H6 P
你看,我稍微加一個單詞; m# ?. \4 _2 T x$ v
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs." k" s4 R) o+ i
就自然了。% ^; {" r& n) ~5 X, p0 }2 S
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