aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
. m4 E6 O1 V) |0 q- F我來給你說說吧!
& ?2 }3 p* r; ]+ L首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。8 v' D6 Y. h; ^( p# h+ v- b
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... + ~& s- c- E; _% U; ?5 K& i3 i8 ^
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.' @5 X8 t2 {! ]' r3 W) S& W
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6 n# F9 n' R( uYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.) e8 r3 e" ?& Q P5 t
1 r% b0 G) |, x g7 D& K同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
+ Y3 @9 S; w1 z& @. t: H/ \他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好+ d$ J# H# B3 a1 B/ M
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的9 E6 C3 q5 v: b% k) ^
稍微加一點料, n0 F8 s6 M0 ], \, Q" R# \$ D
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.) o) J# Y0 `8 F5 Y" I
就再次變得自然了
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