aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 * M0 Z/ R8 V' C% H6 A
我來給你說說吧!- S6 B, A7 P' }7 n+ O
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。7 B9 H7 R0 r3 `7 P: g( r2 L
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... d9 T, p& ]! ]; I5 Z3 i* L
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.8 b. \* M6 d: y. H1 U4 |$ C/ F/ U
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& {( {" g$ Z- W, P( p WYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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* q* u; P2 U8 a: h: _6 Q8 w7 ?同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句) o' F. ?- C3 `+ \: v, C
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好- e/ O4 A3 ?, B% v! |1 ~" Z2 A) Y
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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, X5 D# u/ z* t) ^. mYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.1 M5 h) P5 X9 [* e9 M
就再次變得自然了
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