aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 8 A" l. [1 q5 h( Z _5 {
我來給你說說吧!. q) q1 z6 b" ?' q
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。2 E" o1 [$ U4 I
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... ( C) U* K t; l
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit., {6 T4 W. c- `+ ~ x
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學員改寫:
0 f* I, W& n8 v, CYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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1 V' [3 _# N3 a3 w6 x同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句 F: V/ \ g2 q% L
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好9 b) Y2 M* W0 z4 B2 V7 c1 ~7 g
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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3 [. `4 W3 i! Y4 t, _- e9 S& F, {You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.- P7 y3 w- ]4 H1 `. a# g; a: v, v& `
就再次變得自然了+ K5 j# \% P4 L3 c+ V! B c
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