aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 ' n: Z0 i: l* k+ H1 |% I2 S
我來給你說說吧!
+ z, ?2 E; @7 L: n3 A3 n# C首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
1 t" [2 k- r0 ]" u$ R( XDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... $ v3 {! V* ^- o
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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學員改寫:
+ }! U5 }1 v( b/ F( J- t1 rYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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0 |5 H T+ P* {2 o! d. ]; \" k' M同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句" D6 x' X2 X1 |/ D
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好- g: v6 \1 N$ N6 j
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的" [6 h, v+ j. q. F1 d
稍微加一點料# ^: o# B7 Q# ~, i: K8 c
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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