自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 ( y y+ w/ I; K1 ^" G$ W# \7 t" R7 ?
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... # l& ~. J. Q# C( h- `
原文:
" v& k) N3 J7 }3 Y9 vBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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學員改寫:
! u, j3 m; l2 W( }# k9 `# cBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.. f% e( |: L t4 Y% a0 R
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
) I; U4 u1 Y( _因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
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Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.2 p$ a8 Q8 E$ H7 R9 a3 y
就自然了。
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