aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 : l! a: p" b" ] N
我來給你說說吧!$ ]- i) K, ~/ W8 z
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
; W2 F. ?& z0 O5 P1 q) g: s. aDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.# V+ _7 D- G3 E1 b7 _( Q
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, e# i7 v# v; v! D, j' o0 ^You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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3 c5 z2 i5 V$ g7 D, f, w同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
8 q* o$ p# L* ?" x+ d他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
. x& y' O/ m9 e( A3 Z樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
/ h( a' e$ D) E( O. Q稍微加一點料
) R" M& ?8 F6 l( RYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
5 ?9 A) }6 [7 D就再次變得自然了
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