自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 + b% ] l5 ~' }& K
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... 2 n, L1 E6 I9 U) ^' v
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.; F7 ?3 |& ^& O( ^3 R
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8 n! X% D( I2 e! O' cBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs., [9 y0 v' x4 E% g# s
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
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Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.2 `4 v4 { Z& B' E# s
就自然了。; l/ A3 I! B! z( _, p! f" N2 ?- t
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