aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 5 V5 `- ], c) P6 n9 e( O
我來給你說說吧!2 j$ U6 B' `! ~8 ?( C7 U7 D
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
" i) a+ ^/ v H* ADofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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- c0 K* x/ }8 k4 qIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.3 S. N( Y9 {4 m4 K1 g
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句' b* m& v' j, ^& \
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
^& s; D" q- A% L/ S' c/ b樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
6 X7 B9 f/ K! A' w6 k就再次變得自然了
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