aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 ' s9 s" _4 M8 L- R) _: E
我來給你說說吧!
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Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... 3 t/ I: K% \, o, @. |) H
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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學員改寫:% l2 G4 [5 b! @6 D# a. ^
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit./ z3 h9 v6 J( Y4 A2 `& V
9 k, }' B; t' ~* t; W同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
0 ~1 c9 S9 Z E- q. m1 f8 \他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好/ C6 k. C; F' V9 c. r
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的, n' T M" ]' K# k( I
稍微加一點料
) U+ P! U; {, OYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
! g! w$ i2 T. d' e就再次變得自然了
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