aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 ) Y3 G+ Y1 Z: h8 l7 |4 t( Y
我來給你說說吧!
4 T1 b; N9 e& Q3 I. z/ _+ K首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。% k( |6 y0 M9 f) g, }3 f
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... {4 F4 o+ U" ], s) O: N1 C
原文:
6 F- Y/ s' g9 @/ P% VIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句7 G) V- t, n. @; z+ ^" q6 L8 V# q/ Y
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
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稍微加一點料
4 U" k: J% ^) b: ^! k; nYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
2 L8 Y4 d* s) L/ t4 H就再次變得自然了/ p4 I7 @* Y9 f& ^( r1 ]) \' H4 V9 D
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