自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
+ Y8 B3 f1 s4 U) d: yBecause of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... 7 N) R* w0 [& Q) d! U
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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- Y4 H) t' g/ Y+ H3 s這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,, U+ A5 m4 t5 m0 x+ U% f+ {! K: @
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
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4 @2 E1 ]) E" f( ~8 I; kBecause of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.) x$ [ {# y" Y. m
就自然了。4 r& n3 J: Q, V9 u, ~
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