aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
# I* ?- f) P$ i. E7 k' I v我來給你說說吧!
" \% t, B. ?$ a* J首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。8 r p' s \+ i1 V* I
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... & c8 \' h) B% [/ g
原文:
$ c* Z/ \* f& c$ PIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.; [/ Z3 ^7 I: l9 P; Q2 C, S
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/ c9 X9 q1 z) L2 U `! Q. v# c) j2 lYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.3 A6 X/ Y& o& y/ Z! X! a( l3 k& w
/ @$ i3 [ @; W4 S! f同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
' j/ U8 {& U6 B m' z他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好9 U6 ]% X2 [& h) q& d: ^
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
' m/ Q1 j, S, G6 W5 C稍微加一點料8 v, r8 _2 O" L9 E" `( ^
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
6 ?9 [3 J2 i; o! {0 k' P& X( g就再次變得自然了3 m8 V) X. u! @( M
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