自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
$ m6 ^- h* d" ]Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ...
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
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