aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 # A- i2 m' S( w w
我來給你說說吧!! m8 O9 @; o5 t, c
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
1 w; _/ \8 l) S4 HDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... 1 o. \3 n! B9 k9 d' R$ R
原文:
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學員改寫:4 i1 T4 J% G4 G5 P
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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, V! M$ e/ y! U: N, M+ U$ P& t& X2 k同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句. e& Z0 m. G k) t$ q$ M/ F3 y
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
. l( B) A0 ?: s) V# i' T# U9 x樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的& E$ `6 |8 n$ s
稍微加一點料" h, G4 u' h6 R! y
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.0 V# K/ l4 a6 }, k. a) f: ]
就再次變得自然了
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