自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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: z9 V' J4 t9 v) uBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.6 n* k4 u3 o: U' u# F+ `
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4 ]$ y- K0 R0 r, T. K7 @# x& U5 yBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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e& j' w7 M" |, Y' m) K, N這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
# ?- o. Q: m2 P' ?$ { W a& }因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,# N4 p0 X5 c, O# `# Q- n
你看,我稍微加一個單詞4 F+ G3 v- y q7 L. L9 c
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.1 Q& F4 S4 v4 q/ B
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