aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 _* F8 Y, i* t) [
我來給你說說吧!
/ q4 x# k9 N( a) Z首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。) W9 o7 |8 [3 d, O8 u' u3 H6 N3 m
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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. W8 R" | ?/ ?1 E& C9 H# t( ZIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.( o! b5 @) {4 c$ Q* d( ^
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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+ j2 A9 o* Y2 a- a! Q# y. O同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句" u5 ]; v4 |) w
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
+ B8 u3 n4 |8 X: G- s/ S# G2 N$ R樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的0 S/ y/ i. ?# |* W% H; f6 f7 T
稍微加一點料
0 L0 y5 y# r) LYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.& y' h% s2 {+ l
就再次變得自然了
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