自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 7 y* \# x7 @7 x- `
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ... # F* q* U+ }0 f7 o1 T8 L5 p
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.# }' K6 o3 q$ N" C) i& s7 W
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! i# i) t# Y8 k+ X* s$ F, kBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,; x5 x# j2 M0 {( u1 H1 ?2 ]7 [
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,1 ?' W! L: P3 X7 x
你看,我稍微加一個單詞
+ k" e8 U/ c5 JBecause of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.4 [) Z" \- h' h( v" @. I
就自然了。
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