aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 2 l* _8 i. j ^
我來給你說說吧!
# }, S9 j2 u5 i) L3 t首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。8 ~9 Y) a1 a! t% O* {
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句5 @5 Q% s, t- H9 |
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好+ z5 w9 ~% S1 v) F* ]. L& \
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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* i' l _/ _' O# R) c* C! KYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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