自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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原文:
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學員改寫:
+ f- m$ T k5 [! T* jBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
" A5 f& @! K( V/ t l2 \因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
' d5 O% s2 B( e @, O) g7 b你看,我稍微加一個單詞
, U& p' a' G: [Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
2 I9 v& E1 G& E0 L" S# H; Y就自然了。2 O, \% z. x3 d5 ^" ]" P
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