aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 6 M2 g( g) i3 f- M5 l
我來給你說說吧!
7 h6 R0 J+ G& k9 H) l9 Y7 Y首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。# I% I8 Y# w# b& x: }, |) Y
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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' |2 L' B% H# XYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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( Y6 F0 f2 H m, N1 f/ r0 f同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
8 L! x- d& r# t2 C- n1 D他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好1 v' B7 J% i9 |$ H
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的* l$ O: D+ M) @* F2 ^, O" x
稍微加一點料
- z* e5 G( ~# ^* w3 C Z: ?/ CYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit." u, `) j* s* _9 n5 H
就再次變得自然了
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