自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.' u9 M- u% y L4 c' \7 e' v
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Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.. b/ A: Z* ^( I
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,4 u3 _( u0 _: K* Z1 f+ z
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
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Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.9 F4 D4 \7 W) l
就自然了。
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