aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 % r6 R' v3 w) ?% _- n0 g5 Q! f
我來給你說說吧!. c, h6 k/ G, s0 k) D% F% t
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.# K @% w# {6 ^2 Q! S" B! Q" b" b
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學員改寫:
|5 k$ |+ y3 Q5 Z5 u, H) nYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句% m( d& v! B- t) C( i, w
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好. ?' |$ `+ @3 Z
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的$ k8 q. k2 S W+ L0 A
稍微加一點料/ P( W, i4 O: R' K3 @
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
! U9 U5 Y1 x5 P, e& f就再次變得自然了4 I2 a9 t5 W! `& F4 A
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