aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
; q, S8 L8 Z# L# d. _5 r; S我來給你說說吧!
& R! [; a; W, g0 k' V7 D* u6 z4 R首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。+ e9 _) G$ u1 N7 d, d4 q
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... 3 T$ E2 }. b1 @, [
原文:
2 u$ c" z8 r9 V; AIf needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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學員改寫:" g* g& m9 B# h9 u/ h3 U/ e ?
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.1 [) s9 v1 A, G. R
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
' }; T I. ?8 H, ^0 J" J$ z他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好7 s5 {# i! U0 Q* y
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的9 u2 W* J. L! R/ `4 H# u
稍微加一點料% t8 W, Q) m* j$ _; K- ` u) X8 z0 I
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.( S7 p2 Q1 d* E5 ?( k
就再次變得自然了
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