自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 + g+ Z& W8 i2 e2 v6 h9 t
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ...
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8 }* @* |3 f& t- h, J$ p3 k, xBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.7 y @# T/ c! y, N$ M
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,) ?: ~ l4 @" [0 l
因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,9 d+ s8 n) c* v( J% B
你看,我稍微加一個單詞
3 `8 C ^! r7 |6 X' |Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
5 E1 F; _2 |9 @% p) ?就自然了。) ?( C# C3 E& @+ g3 r
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