自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 8 }9 M1 c0 }7 W5 _. h3 _
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.9 [, P% C8 ]* \$ Z
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; k* y% j/ a" T4 z8 e這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
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就自然了。: l4 F+ \8 a4 R- G3 b5 M! ]
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