aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
3 a/ F3 i3 G" z我來給你說說吧!# t4 q2 G6 R7 `8 q# ]4 T8 c. E( ]
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
! ?$ l0 i- w, d0 ]" jDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ...
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' g1 m* M8 D c* w5 @If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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4 l1 T4 B$ P* `- q5 E9 A同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句3 Q- v3 H# s ^! ?
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
4 Y( t5 w3 ]; [樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.' R# u8 ]7 v) ]; b3 C3 i# l9 u
就再次變得自然了
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