aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 . p d" q9 @, a' v6 J' _
我來給你說說吧!7 |( K# D- ]) H2 a; v
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。7 _9 e- s4 Z# D% X. C
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... " ?$ G: T" _: k3 w
原文:& o& l& K3 o$ O+ A& N; [# y
If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.! j. Y# X6 I1 D& r) x$ w" M
Z& A& e8 I7 w9 a% m- _
學員改寫:0 U! o K0 Z0 k& l
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
& z! ~: J h2 a
2 _9 x$ ^8 B0 m; ?同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
; c! \4 K" U r7 b0 ^- g+ e+ f他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好, h" M% h6 m3 |, b* P& I
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
& s) O% N4 d! z! e) L. m稍微加一點料' t1 c" F+ ^- k1 L& N) `( n
You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.3 T' U; p o1 }6 N* L3 N) }
就再次變得自然了& V4 U2 N9 e& ?, F1 i, L6 H* H
& B) H# k7 j4 ^8 p! t- p- N% ~3 L/ d |