aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 
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9 H* p9 j \" ]! \5 ~# r首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。
# g/ J; b5 d1 m0 _. kDofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... : S% v7 g: b0 q$ b! j
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If needed, a small, rolled towel can be used to fill in any small spaces between the crotch strap and the baby to provide a snug fit.
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學員改寫:
3 N+ |1 I1 R3 V9 mYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.7 K. J% M7 `9 |5 d$ V0 z) }
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句
0 ~5 t9 b9 g& [+ ?- ^' s他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好: \+ A) [( r: e) x; p6 |8 w8 E
樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的/ }$ a. H6 l3 X1 x# a$ M2 Q1 D
稍微加一點料
6 x+ K4 ?! f# P t4 T0 CYou can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
2 m. |3 H. b, T就再次變得自然了
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