自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 
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原文:
: K1 P' r$ C GBecause of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.
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9 ~% h+ G3 [5 e, OBecause of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
3 e1 D' h7 N; i* j l8 i7 i5 n因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
, B7 O5 V& Q8 d0 h你看,我稍微加一個單詞
/ V8 }6 b; o* y4 N8 e. lBecause of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.& G; v$ @* p f" |7 z* X8 {5 `- y
就自然了。
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