自由之路 發表於 2013-10-29 22:42 ) i4 H, b, ]& Q5 b
Because of their size which are tiny, in any spaces which is small, what baby support cushions have ...
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Because of their tiny size, parents should choose a car seat carefully that will cater to the needs of a preemie.. ]! m+ h4 n& Z8 x3 K' H
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學員改寫:
; e0 A3 F* D# O. k& D$ v5 z7 |Because of their size which are tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.
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* o% w1 A5 ]$ X/ u這裡是我在教程中提到過,形容詞變定語從句,一定要加點料,
- _8 g0 d9 W& \; r/ \因為是第一次改,所以他沒注意,
$ R* F4 K/ f# p3 O你看,我稍微加一個單詞! L. \$ B- q* l. A- T0 S0 m* ~
Because of their size which is comparatively tiny, a car seat should be chosen carefully by parents that will cater to a preemie's needs.) J) T5 e; u$ @9 a6 n' K: O( W' C
就自然了。
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