aicheng262 發表於 2013-10-29 23:34 + f: d+ B' U V9 G9 G2 P
我來給你說說吧!4 V7 e8 x1 u- Z' M. j& p4 p) i
首先我是dofast的用戶,也是樂樂改的用戶。' K2 r: c. U: y# [) l. w
Dofast真的是一個翻譯很好的教程,看完教 ... : L4 e6 R0 w0 B, Q1 p
原文:
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學員改寫:
0 M; d& z( E" X8 @You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces which is small between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit. s v& R3 C g5 T8 u
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同樣問題也是出在形容詞轉定語從句- C' |2 M9 [# ~" i t6 Q
他是看完教程第一次改寫,所以這個點還沒有掌握太好
* N: V( q2 ]# P4 c, v5 n& W1 h樂樂改專門支持論壇,可以免費給他提供點評服務的
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You can use a small, rolled towel to fill in any spaces that is not so big between the baby and the crotch strap to supply a snug fit.
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