【每日改寫練習】2013.12.13

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camera case
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Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.  
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1. Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.

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2. 中級改寫版（結合樂樂改21改點以及口訣）
這個例子，包括以後的例子裡，大家一定要記住：
定語從句一定要掌握好，改寫裡很重要，不管是否有樂樂改教程或者dofast教程，改寫者一定要掌握。

1. A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there』s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.

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3. 高級改寫版（結合改寫分析工具結果，自由發揮）

1. Do you have a case for your camera? It』s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an 「ugly」 camera but I like it so much that I won』t exchange it for any other cameras.

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通過copyscape檢測

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勉強 I've learnt a lot thx

簡易改寫版居然能通過, copyscape也太....
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簡易版過不了谷歌，單純的替換關鍵詞，谷歌能識別
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怎麼不上QQ了啊

xiao9 發表於 2013-12-13 20:33
怎麼不上QQ了啊

豬蹄

掩面，俺需要回爐重新學習英語
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