【每日改寫練習】2013.12.16

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樂樂改 改寫分析工具結果
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1. 簡易改寫版（幾乎不需要英語基礎。。。）

1. <blockquote>Whenever it involves website of yours, extra attention needs to be paid to every minute detail to ensure it works ideally to offer its purpose. Listed here are seven rules of thumb to look at to ensure your website works perfectly.

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2. 中級改寫版（結合樂樂改21改點以及口訣）

1. <blockquote>When it comes to their websites, webmasters should pay extra attention to every minute detail which makes sure that the purpose of websites will be served optimally. To make sure their websites perform well, here are 7 rules of thumb that is important to observe.

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3. 高級改寫版（結合改寫分析工具結果，自由發揮）

1. In order to make sure every website performs optimally to serve its purpose, webmasters should pay extra attention to details. Here are the 7 rules of thumb that you can give a try.

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搶個沙發，支撐下。。。

支持一下，英文寫作是這行最重要的基礎工具沒有之一。簡潔的表達方式容易讓閱讀者多停留一會兒。

不知道上次那個老外還會不會來 - -

很好，很強大。繼續練習英語翻譯

暈蛋瘋親 發表於 2013-12-16 17:22
不知道上次那個老外還會不會來 - -

% M6 I1 B, k, [; ^1 A1 [7 {，什麼老外啊，不明白

進來學習學習，方法比努力更重要

改寫勉強能讀得通，但如果熟悉了老外的思維模式，就會容易很多
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認真練習，爭取每天都有所進步

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