麻煩哪位英語高手幫忙翻譯一句純正點的謝謝

你好
  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

原帖由 rr2005 於 2006-8-19 01:15 發表
你好
  你們公司上個月發給我的支票我至今仍然沒有收到，由於我現在馬上即將搬進新家了，所以能否麻煩你重發一次支票到我如下的新地址。謝謝。

; H' J+ W0 d8 M+ I( I. gthe check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.
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as I am going to move to a new house, would you please kindly send out the check again, to the following address?

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翻的不錯~~~

熱心助人＋

原帖由 中國VIP俱樂部 於 2006-9-14 17:51 發表


the check you issued last month has not arrived yet till now.

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7 t  I* o1 i3 o+ g4 o9 c- Y& h! ?更地道和直接一點的翻譯如下:

Dear Sir/Madam:
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We haven't received your last payment.
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We will move to a new premises therefore please re-send the last and future payment to the following address.
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We are looking forward to hearing from you.
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6 x+ u; d8 c( p9 Y* tRegards

XXX

好心助人並無心冒犯

supercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。

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原帖由 段續風 於 2006-10-8 17:11 發表
supercrasy 翻譯的時候還是最好說明是 支票沒有收到。 另外please re-send the last and future payment ，這個地方也應注意一下動賓搭配。 last payment 可以說resend, future payment 說resend 就不合適了。
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Dear Sir/lady
i have not recived the check that it's send by your company last month,because i'll remove my house,so kindly pls re-send the check to my new address,the new address detail as below:


looking forward you kindly reply.
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that it's send  改成 that was sent

Dear Sir/Madam
5 g) o% D& }4 JI have not yet received the check issued last month from your company .As I will  move into a new house, sorry to trouble you to send the check to the following  address:
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Best Regards!
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Yours sincerely
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