請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下

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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！

I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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1 |" j+ u: \# ]Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

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Hi,
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I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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[Correct Address]
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Regards,
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謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下
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+ F+ e8 J  F) b" ]) f( H試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

" z; A6 S: x: {  ]  U6 T- Z- \樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。

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) X  c0 k1 m! x( @. tRecent payment was received with many thanks.
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But it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?

" \& R; F5 i4 o8 h* ?# o$ y1 t1 Z; mI look forward to hearing from you.