請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


4 g- C4 S: d# f7 S: F試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！
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I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.

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I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:

[Correct Address]
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Regards,
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謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
* D: W' p2 J5 }7 h' B( G! X謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


7 s1 B: \; J" I% P: i試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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7 D) x% V; `( F& |來個更地道一點的：
' N% M3 X; v/ q6 h4 I9 p0 cRecent payment was received with many thanks.

+ ~; P5 k6 ?9 g: R4 m( rBut it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.

Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?

I look forward to hearing from you.