請高手幫我譯一下

謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下

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試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

地址錯誤也能收到？ 可以收到的話，就沒什麼大問題啊！

I`ve received the cheque but, the address on the check with a small error.
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Can you fix it for me? Thanks.

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I have received the cheque, thank you. But there was an error with the address, can you please correct it for me? The correct information are:
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[Correct Address]
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Regards,
[YourName]

謝謝兩位:

原帖由 guoguo6699 於 2007-6-3 16:00 發表
9 f( H6 L8 K  ?8 o9 A1 P謝謝你,我已經收到了支票，但是支票地址上還有一個小小的錯誤，請幫我更正一下


試了幾個翻譯軟件,總覺不地道.

樓上兩位都翻譯的不錯。
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來個更地道一點的：
0 G+ E) V- g0 h1 E7 f; C) k( y3 BRecent payment was received with many thanks.
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But it seems that the address shown on the cheque has a discrepancy with the information I submitted.
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Would you mind to cancel the original one and re-send the correct one in order that our bank can process it properly?
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, ]$ w$ w: Z* `0 q4 OI look forward to hearing from you.